Tuesday, June 20, 2006

Whom did you sing to?

Your dwindling song hangs in faded tunes
consoling your callused heart, a forlorn soul
Whom did you sing to all your waking moments?

When in your long, silky mane his face found paradise
When on your bosom he carved his undying love
You sang – your words walked down the aisle, your tune held your train

When on your lips he wrote poetry
When your every blink denied him bliss
You sang – your words a bright light, your tune wiped away shadows

When love was a shade you could no longer elicit
When you persisted and bled to paint the perfect sunset
You sang – your words a salve, your tune relived your past

When you questioned the mirror and counted time on your face
When your reflection was real, you felt imaginary
You sang – your words an angry submission, your tune perfunctory

When you woke up and wiped away tears your dreams wept
When your sorrows rose above the horizon and shone on you alone
You sang – your words silent tears, your tune lost in the mist

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10 Comments:

Blogger Sin said...

Superb! I think this will be my fav from now on. :)

8:37 AM, June 21, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is exquisite, my friend.

9:30 AM, June 21, 2006  
Blogger second_wind said...

lovely...as always..I need to start looking for better adjectives

9:19 PM, June 21, 2006  
Blogger simplemissie said...

M3,
Mind blowing ....Whoever adressed you Mr Satan is now repenting ...me sorry..pastor says Satan has a bad head, thinks evil and has a glittering body which can hear almost anything.....Never heard of Satan being such a wonderful poet..
Soumya

9:31 PM, June 21, 2006  
Blogger simplemissie said...

"galathi se mistake hogaya"

9:39 PM, June 21, 2006  
Blogger M3 said...

@TF: Thanks! Fav, really? Adrasakka!

@Cadencia: Thanks, new recruit of Swisslam! Do you have your commandment ready?

@Second_Wind: Thanks ree! I'm honored! All settled in now?

@Simple Missie: Good to see you back. Thanks for your comment, and your pastor is right...I do bling bling!

3:45 PM, June 22, 2006  
Blogger chérie said...

My gosh M3! Your poem knocked me off my feet! What made you write this? I'd really like to know . . .

1:17 PM, June 28, 2006  
Blogger M3 said...

Thank you Cherie! I don't really know what makes me write anything :-)

8:02 AM, July 02, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey M3, Sorry I'm late. I have a lot to catch up on. :)

In Whom did you sing to?, I can see her pain. It's beautiful and kind how you understand her.

10:07 PM, August 29, 2006  
Blogger M3 said...

Thank you, Shruti!

8:18 PM, September 07, 2006  

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